Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

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Today world

has been facing

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was facing

several challenges due to population explosion. The worrying issues are nowadays increased

traffic

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congestion and overcrowded building specifically in urban areas. Some people proposed that it can be tackled by shifting the industrial building and the respective people to the village side. I am of the opinion that

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it would bring some benefits, it

has still had

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still has

the drawbacks.

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, I partially agree with

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statement.

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essay will discuss how

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method could reduce the problems and examine the potential drawbacks associated with it. On the one hand, moving companies and factory to the countryside will possibly reduce the

traffic

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and increase the space for housing. Because, when the factories and their employees moved to out of city, there would be

significant reduction

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a significant reduction

in the private vehicles which are used by

respective companies

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the respective companies

and their staff, and

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would contribute to less

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city

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the city

cities

a city

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considerable amount

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a considerable amount

of land would be empty as industries and staff vacates their place,

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it would be contributed to have a more ventilated and less crowded houses in cities.

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, given consideration to the above advantages,

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moving strategy seems to be a possible solution to the current alarming problems of

traffic

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and housing.

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, for a good reason,

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would be a worrying development. Because it could disturb the harmony of the

country side

rural regions

countryside

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specifically, it

could pollute the surrounding environment and

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disturb the biodiversity of the nature.

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, it could be a risk that in the long run, countryside may face the problems as city are currently facing now. In conclusion, while

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notion could markedly improve the

traffic

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and housing

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urban areas, it may potentially bring the harmful effects to the countryside in the future. Government should take a necessary precaution prior to implement

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idea. By considering the cons associated with

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this suggestions

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these suggestions

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, I

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partially agree

with the above statement.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

322 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

traffic congestion
housing problems
countryside
large companies
factories
employees
urban areas
land availability
relocate
stimulate economic development
challenges
infrastructure
transportation
rural areas

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