Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

Today world

has been facing

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was facing

several challenges due to population explosion. The worrying issues are nowadays increased

traffic

congestion and overcrowded building specifically in urban areas. Some people proposed that it can be tackled by shifting the industrial building and the respective people to the village side. I am of the opinion that

although

it would bring some benefits, it

has still had

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still has

the drawbacks.

Therefore

, I partially agree with

this

statement.

This

essay will discuss how

this

method could reduce the problems and examine the potential drawbacks associated with it. On the one hand, moving companies and factory to the countryside will possibly reduce the

traffic

and increase the space for housing. Because, when the factories and their employees moved to out of city, there would be

significant reduction

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a significant reduction

in the private vehicles which are used by

respective companies

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the respective companies

and their staff, and

this

would contribute to less

traffic

in

city

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the city

cities

a city

. Similar to that,

considerable amount

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a considerable amount

of land would be empty as industries and staff vacates their place,

thus

it would be contributed to have a more ventilated and less crowded houses in cities.

Therefore

, given consideration to the above advantages,

this

moving strategy seems to be a possible solution to the current alarming problems of

traffic

and housing.

However

, for a good reason,

this

would be a worrying development. Because it could disturb the harmony of the

country side

rural regions

countryside

,

specifically it

Accept comma addition

specifically, it

could pollute the surrounding environment and

further

disturb the biodiversity of the nature.

Also

, it could be a risk that in the long run, countryside may face the problems as city are currently facing now. In conclusion, while

this

notion could markedly improve the

traffic

and housing

of

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in

urban areas, it may potentially bring the harmful effects to the countryside in the future. Government should take a necessary precaution prior to implement

this

idea. By considering the cons associated with

this suggestions

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these suggestions

this suggestion

, I

partially agrees

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partially agree

with the above statement.