Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

Education
is undeniably the main and most important structural element of a country unless you were born in an Amazonian tribe. In most countries, getting
education
Suggestion
an education
is hardly affordable for most people even you study at one of the government institutions unless you are fortunate to afford
such
expenses to be able to obtain one of your basic human
right
Suggestion
rights
as a citizen of your country. If your personal wealth allows you to get a better
aducation
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
through private schools, you should be able to get it, but I
personaly
as yourself
personally
think that
education
should be absolutely free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. I would like to
eleborate
marked by complexity and richness of detail
elaborate
my trough examples about
this
very controversial topic. To start with
comparison
Suggestion
a comparison
the comparison
comparisons
of two kids from different backgrounds would be a great example to explain why
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think
education
should be free for everyone: Kid A, born in a family where parents work as street cleaners because they did not have the opportunity and money to get
education
to have a better paying job, so they
also
can not
can not
cannot
afford their kid to send a college and the kid has to
also
work to be able to afford and support his or her family for basic living expenses, like food and rent. Kid B
have
Suggestion
has
parents who
makes
Suggestion
make
are made
more than enough money to send their
kid
Suggestion
kids
to one of the top schools in the country. So to some extent, your future relatively depends on the family and
enviroment
Suggestion
the environment
environment
you were born
in which
Accept comma addition
in, which
is
just unfairness
Suggestion
the just unfairness
in terms of the
education
you get.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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