Nowadays people the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

These
days'
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days
technology
has changed
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is changing
the way many people socializing with each other and has influenced the type of people
interaction
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interacting
in various ways. These changes have some positive and negative implications in terms of
communication but
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communication, but
I believe the positive impact of
technology
on relationships is more conspicuous.
Technology
ushered
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has ushered
humanity into a new epoch in
communication
that has a profound impact on the interactions people make.
First
, it seems with more technical devices people prefer to use them to make contact which is so convenient.
In addition
, they cannot afford enough time to interact with each other.
Accordingly
, social applications have wide appeal among people like Facebook and
Whats
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What's
App which makes a way for keeping in touch or foster new relationships. What's more, the quality of interaction which people make through the virtual world has significantly declined in several respects like emotions, sentimentality, and passions. So that
technology
can make confusion and misunderstanding since people are not able to express their real feelings via these modern devices vividly. It is a given that, most virtual
communication
people make, have less emotional express compare with face-to-face communications. But the thing is the advancements that
technology
affords, make the possible drawbacks pale In comparison. In the
first
place, it can pave the way for having a sustainable form of interaction. The availability of
communication
applications provides certain conditions that enable people to stay in touch with each other at any time and anywhere.
Also
, with the advent of
technology
, the barrier of long-distance communications seems to be eradicated that had a huge impact on the relationships of those people emigrated overseas. It helps them be in touch with their families more than before and provide for them a possibility to make a video call to see family members and enjoy it occasionally. In conclusion,
technology
has certainly revolutionized
communication
between people. In spite of some downside aspects of it that have affected the corporations' people make, it is definitely a great step into future
communication
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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