Some government say how many children a family can have in their country. they may control the number of children someone has through taxes it is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. do you agree or disagree.

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It is suggested that the
governmenal
relating to or dealing with the affairs or structure of government or politics or the state
governmental
institutions should set some restrictions on the country when it comes to giving birth to their children.
Thus
Accept comma addition
Thus, this
this
proportion can be controlled by imposing taxes on the parents themselves. I completely agree with
this
method. One of the main reasons why the authority should supervise the population due to the scarce resources which the country have. When the state doesn't have enough resources that can cover humankind basic needs.
Moreover
,
withthe
Suggestion
with the
insistence on the individuals to get married and have a lot of
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
children's
this
leads to increase the barriers on the government in
additon
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
to
expereince
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
a huge shortage in the natural resources.
For example
, the managerial department in Japan decided to limit the number of new born
child
Suggestion
children
and it
rutned
moved around an axis or center
turned
out to be really successful.
Secondly
, in order to determine the number of the offsprings I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that the best method to do
this
is by setting high taxes on the mothers and fathers. When the government
put
Suggestion
puts
boundries
the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something
boundaries
o
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
to
on
the family who want to have children
furthermore
, if they breach the law and where being able to pay taxes
this
means that they don't have any
probles
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
and are self sufficient. Taking the us as an example, when the executive department suggested to put high taxes,
this
was a reason
t
in the direction of
to
limit the number of the youth.
As a result
, nourish the economical situation
accordingly
. In
conculsion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, I strongly
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
that the government must monitor its demographics and it is certainly true that the taxes are considered as an efficient
soltuon
an operation that segregates items into groups according to a specified criterion
sorting
to diminish the barriers that the city centre might have in the coming years.
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