Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
No doubt, there are many problematic environments surrounding us which is really
need
to be resolved immediately.A substantial number of people consider that, the drying out of many plants and animals is the momentous issue while others believe environmental problem is more significant.But people have strong feelings on their arguments.Suggestion
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serious these problems need to overcome urgently.Both Suggestion
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it is not deniable that, a large number of plants and animals are decreasing dramatically.Accept space
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losing the balance of the environment
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we are missing out various kinds of fruits.Furthermore women
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On the other hand
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as polluted environment
and alteration of climate.Moreover
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As a result
the balance of the environment
is hampered daily.It is undisputed that not only vehicles are responsible for pollution but also
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