When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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that the usage of the building is the significant factor when designing it

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of the outer appearance, whereas others have a viewpoint that the exterior aspect is the primary factor. I agree with the opinion that

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the external beauty of a building is important, but if it is not useful,

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the building is a waste.

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, there are many erections where the designs are not attractive, but they are very useful to the people in many ways.

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, the government nowadays are trying to spend more money on constructing erections which

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the usage as their major priority like for accommodation to the poor people, as a library, hospitals and

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schools.

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, all these are very important, because whatever the structure is the people will utilize it to fulfil their daily requirements.

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, in India we have the housing board facilities for people living in slums. Even though they are small, congested and the outward appearance is not attractive, but it gives an accommodation to people during all the climatic conditions and temperatures.

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, when erecting a house or a factory, the most important things to be noted are the area, materials, way it is availed and

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the design. Even though there are various constructions where the outer

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are extraordinary, but due to high prices many middle- and low-class people are unable to use these. For examples, there are various five-star hotels in India, where the building design is fantastic and extraordinary, but the public cannot make use of it on

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the design of an erections is necessary, but the way people avail them is the significant factor.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

functionality
user experience
ergonomic
productivity
safety standards
building codes
emergency exits
ventilation
accessibility features
sustainability
energy-efficient
flexibility
adaptability
multifunctional
regulations
operational costs
environmental impact

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When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Caring of children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take training courses. Do you agree or disagree?

Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: Your reason for writing What you would like to happen: A nice and respectful style.