The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the
number
of people who use the subway station in London in
different time periods per Change preposition
at
day
.
Overall
, it can be seen that there is a greater number
of people who use the underground station during peak times in both morning and evening whereas
the number
is less in early
morning and late night.
Add an article
the early
According to
the graph, the subway
commuters’ Correct quantifier usage
number of subway
number
begin
Correct subject-verb agreement
begins
with
100 at 6.00 am. It Change preposition
at
then
substantially rises to 400 between 8 to 9 am, which is the highest for the day
. Thereafter
, there is a drop in number
of Change the article
a number
the number
travelers
and Change the spelling
travellers
reach
Correct subject-verb agreement
reaches
to
almost 200 at 10 am and Change preposition
apply
this
number
is further
declined
to 100 at 4.00 pm. Apart from the sudden climb up to almost 400 passengers at 6.00 pm, Replace the word
declines
at the end
of the day
, only around 150 people use the station for their needs, which is slightly higher than that of in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
day
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