The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the
number
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of people who use the subway station in London
in
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different time periods per
day
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there is a greater
number
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of people who use the underground station during peak times in both morning and evening
whereas
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the
number
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is less in
early
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the early
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morning and late night.
According to
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the graph, the
subway
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number of subway
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commuters’
number
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begin
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begins
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with
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100 at 6.00 am. It
then
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substantially rises to 400 between 8 to 9 am, which is the highest for the
day
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.
Thereafter
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, there is a drop in
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number
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a number
the number
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of
travelers
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travellers
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and
reach
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reaches
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to
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apply
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almost 200 at 10 am and
this
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number
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is
further
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declined
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declines
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to 100 at 4.00 pm. Apart from the sudden climb up to almost 400 passengers at 6.00 pm,
at the end
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of the
day
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, only around 150 people use the station for their needs, which is slightly higher than that of
in
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the beginning of the
day
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.
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