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Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. What is your opinion

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Telling the truth can sometimes be difficult. While most people prefer to free their minds by being certain in discussions while
someother
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some other
 persons find it difficult to be accurate.
This
 essay will discuss why I completely agree that it is preferable to factual when talking. Authenticity is a thing of integrity and should be taken seriously. There is a saying that
certainty
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certainly
 sets the mind and heart free. It can
also
 help free people that have been captured and needs truthfulness from a witness to set them free. There has been cases where an individual
have being
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has been
have been
had been
 legit in words without thinking of the implications and people were instantly set free. Accuracy, not only set the speaker
free but
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free, but
also
 people around them. It could be sometimes difficult to be honest. There could be situations where
lieing
the deliberate act of deviating from the truth
lying
 than saying the real pays.
This
 is because, in most occasions, loyalty
has lead
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has led
 people to an early grave. There is a recent trending news of a woman that was convicted and jailed for about ten years and after several trials, she could not say the real because her life was at stake. In most cases, people tend to draw back from
saying
disclosing unintentionally
telling
 the truth because they are protecting a loved one. In conclusion,
this
 essay discussed why it is good to be genuine will set the person and others around
free
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freely
, it
also
 elaborated on the fact that honesty can sometimes be difficult because someone or something precious might suffer from that veracity. In my opinion, I completely believe that being precise can set everyone free.
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