In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Many nations have advanced agricultural

production

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, while many others are still hungry.

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is because of poor infrastructure and lower local

production

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in developing countries, and

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can be overcame to invest and

also

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to improve nation’s infrastructure and encouraging local

production

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. The fundamental problems of

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issue

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are

that poor nations are dependent to the developed ones. Western nations produce surplus

goods

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goods, for

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United States

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the United States

exports a large volume of agricultural products to developing countries that eroding country's local

production

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furthermore

in addition

Furthermore

, farmers will disappoint if the local

production

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will not be encouraged.

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, not only the importation of goods from foreign countries impedes the local

production

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, but

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increases people's

income spending

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income, spending

many

the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender

money

on imported product that may be expensive, and

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to decline the standard of living of citizens. On

other hand

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the other hand

, there

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are

various ways to solve these problems.

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, to enhance country's agricultural quality by improving awareness of local farmers to grow their farmers

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of relying imported agricultural products and giving subsidies to local farmers and

industrial

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the industrial production sector

production

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sector to provide at

least self-sufficiency

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least self-sufficient

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, another solution can be done through tax incentives

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, imposing higher tax on all possible products from foreign countries to decrease importing exotic products and encourage local

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conclusion, The chief cause of some countries developed agriculturally, while many

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

are hungry is

poor agricultural infrastructure

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the poor agricultural infrastructure

a poor agricultural infrastructure

of developing nations.

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issue

can be solve

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can be solved

by improving and encouraging local

production

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to reduce importation necessary goods.

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Topic Vocabulary:

inequality
distribution
access to resources
climate change
natural disasters
political factors
economic factors
agricultural practices
infrastructure
transportation
population growth
education
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