You recently ordered an item of clothing through a store’s website. When you received it, you discovered it was the wrong size and color

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Dear sir, I requested for a torques blue
gown
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which was advertised on your website on Friday, but on
arrival I
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arrival, I
received a blue flowing
gown
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instead
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of the outfit
i
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I
wanted. The clothing I ordered for was a torques blue ball size eight dress as seen
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on
your website.
It
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two side
pocket
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pockets
and it’s meant to be knee length. When the package was delivered I noticed immediately that the package was bulky. I opened the content to my uttermost surprise it was a navy blue size ten flowing
dress
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dresses
almost looking like a wedding
gown
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. Please I would like to return the dress, so that the appropriate
gown
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I wanted would be given to me
.
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If the cloth I ordered for is no longer in stock, please I will kindly ask for a refund. I hope to hear from you soon. Thanks.
Yours
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Abandon
sincerely, Agbandu Esther Ikechi

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