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Some people believe they should keep all they money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

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Every government has several
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 rules, which should be followed by each and every citizen.
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, some people do not like to pay the
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, because, they want to keep all the money, they have earned. According to me, paying the
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 is the responsibility of an individual to contribute in the progress of the nation. So, I totally disagree with the given statement and the reasons of my disinclination are explained in trailed paragraphs.
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 with, it is commonly seen that, nowadays, the authority is levying a heavy
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 on every product. At a
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 glance, it may be considered as a waste of money. But, in a reality,
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 amount is being used to facilitate local people like us.
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, the basic facilities, which we are enjoying currently,
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 as a good transportation system, the reliable medical system and the government's educational facility, all are attributable to the fund, collected as the
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.
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, the society contributes a lot in the overall development of an individual. So, when a person starts to earn money, it is his/her turn to give back to the society in the form of paying the
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. After all, a certain part of
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 amount is being used for the needy people.
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, in India, twenty percent of the total
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 amount is being spent to educate underprivileged children in rural areas, which plays a vital role to increase the literacy rate of the country. To conclude, paying the
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 can be very useful for citizens as well as people around us.
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, I strongly believe that, everyone should pay the
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 regularly.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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