In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

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this

vacancy, because I enjoy playing with the offsprings

moreover

, had recently graduated an advanced course from the Stanford University of Australia. Let me explain in detail,

firstly

, I have vast knowledge in

this

field with an experience of about 5 years, because we had been under a training period for about 3 years. The university

also

provided me with all the basic and hand-on practices to perform the duties efficiently and effortlessly.

Therefore

, it will be quite convenient and I assure you that, I can manage the household chores as well. I would

also

like to bring to your notice that, during my leisure time, I can assist you in completing office assignments, since I had

also

learnt a technical course on the software management after my college hours. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Sameera

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191 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

The number of students studying science at university is constantly declining. What do you think are the causes? What effects will this have on our society?

Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.

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some perple think animal testing is a necessary evil for both commercial and scientific purposes. What extent do you agree?

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