Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

An increasing number of arguments are going around

world

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the world

about whether children should have a spirit of

competition

or cooperation. Some are of the opinion, former one has to be motivated while others maintain that it would be best to improve their latter skill as it would lead them to have a better

life

in the future.

This

essay will discuss how

both

skills impact the children’s

life

. On the one hand, encouraging the children to compete with their peers or friends would help them to grow in many ways. One of the glaring benefits is that it would obviously boost their energy

level which

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level, which

would motivate them to do better in either studies or sports, resulting in creating a productive workforce.

In other words

, cognitive, innovative and creative skills cannot be developed among children who grow up in a

less

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less competitive

competition

environment.

Although

, it would contribute their overall growth, it still has a risk of developing the conflict and jealousy.

This

may adversely affect their social skills. All in all, regardless of the minor risk, a sense of

competition

is necessary for a child’s development.

On the other hand

, nurturing the children in the more cooperative environment would

also

bring the beneficial effects to their

life

, regardless of a disadvantage associated with it. The primary advantage would be, they can have an opportunity to increase their social skills, which is far more important in the job market.

This

would mean that they would become a good team player.

This

is because, cooperative surroundings will possibly teach children

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about

how to effectively listen and understand the feeling and opinion of others,

thus

make them to be a more social person.

However

, it may depress them as they may feel bored about their

life

due to lack of competitive spirit. In conclusion, in order to be a successful adult,

both

cooperative and

competition

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competitive

skills are vital, given consideration to the pros linked with it.

Therefore

, I am of the opinion that

both

skills should be carefully taught to the children by considering the negative impacts

both

bring.