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India is

highly populated country

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a highly populated country

and in

modern era

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the modern era

, we witnessed

number

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a number

of private vehicles got increased. I agree that, electric cars should replace all cars that burn fossil fuels. According to my opinion, Electric cars are more effective and far more efficient than petrol/diesel cars.

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Here, firstly

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, I would like to highlight that electric cars are

environment

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environmentally

friendly.

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, fossil

fuels

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fuel

cars are producing toxic gases which are detrimental for health.These harmful substances are not not only harmful

for

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human bodies

moreover

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for animals and plants

also

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. We witnessed, lots of health diseases in

past couples

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the past couples

of year's in which Asthma

Accept space

hearts and

lungs

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lung

diseases are common. Numerous dangerous elements and gases are adding into oxygen due

to that human life

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to human life that

is questionable. To overcome and control

this

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issue, Individuals and families are using air purifier's. It is quite implausible for middle class and poor person to buy

such

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high end gadgets. Petrol and diesel vehicle manufacturing industries are

also

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equally responsible for

this

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unfriendly environment directly or indirectly. According to the recent survey done by one of the leading newspaper found that 70% of mortality rate got

increase

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an increase

by air pollution. Electric cars are faster and much comfortable in respective of fossil fuel vehicles. They are more time saving and less expensive than fossil fuel cars.

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can travel smoothly from one place to another without traffic congestion.

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, all developed and developing countries are focusing on using electric vehicles. Lots of industries set up is done and huge investment already incurred by

United States

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the United States

. China,

United States

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the United States

and Japan

already introduced

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has already introduced

electric vehicles and enjoying a

benefits

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benefit

out of it. Foreign countries are continuously doing inventions to promote electric vehicles and exempting taxes to concern industries due to that civic life is getting improved. In Conclusion, I believe electric vehicles are more human and environment friendly because its distinct features are dwindling pollution and providing comfy experience.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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320 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

fossil fuels
emissions
air pollution
greenhouse gases
climate change
sustainable
renewable
electric vehicles
battery technology
charging infrastructure
range anxiety
government support
incentives
subsidies
renewable energy
environmental impact
energy efficiency

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

International travel is becoming cheaper, and more and more countries open their door to tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this statement?

The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?