Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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father
and mother
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themselves bring up heir kiddies.Observable that mothers act hard for kiddies.Both sides will be Speculated before reaching a reasonable conclusion.
On the one hand, men have been more liable Suggestion
are equally devoted
are equally devoting
to
their children financially.Men consume their money for their offspring which is really Suggestion
for
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Moreover
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fathers are usually more serious to punish their offspring so that they avoid crimes.Accept space
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my cousin is now a criminal it happened only for his Accept space
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mother
because his mother
always restrain his father
to punish.Furthermore
, father
makes sure his children’s future about financial.In other words
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In many societies, fathers have excellent educational qualifications and applied experience. That’s why they can better prepare their children for the future.
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offspring, then
then
fathers as well as bonding with mothers is more strong.Moreover
, mothers dedicate much time with their children.In addition
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women are genetically efficient at upbringing.Accept space
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To conclude, in my point of view,
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, both have qualities that should be learned by their kids.Submitted by m6riyad on
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