Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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both play a crucial role for proper upbringing their children.But there are some people who assert that

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mothers are

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contributing

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their fathers.On

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a substantial number of pupils are deliberate that fathers subscribe significant role in children’s life.But people have strong feelings about their arguments.

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in my opinion

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both

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themselves bring up heir kiddies.Observable that mothers act hard for kiddies.Both sides will be Speculated before reaching a reasonable conclusion. On the one hand, men have been more liable

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their children financially.Men consume their money for their offspring which is really

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troubling

for women.

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fathers are usually more serious to punish their offspring so that they avoid crimes.

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my cousin is now a criminal it happened only for his

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because his

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always restrain his

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to punish.

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makes sure his children’s future about financial.

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In many societies, fathers have excellent educational qualifications and applied experience. That’s why they can better prepare their children for the future.

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, mothers have a closer sensational bond with their

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offspring, then

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fathers as well as bonding with mothers is more strong.

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, mothers dedicate much time with their children.

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in many countries, mothers do not engage with any work until the children are adults and

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result, they

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to spend their time with their children.

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, if a child is

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crying, no one

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giving

so many toys wherever

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children

a child

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stop crying

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women are genetically efficient at upbringing.

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as a role of

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, mothers can transfer their competence to their daughters to become ideal mothers in the future. To conclude, in my point of view

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a kid needs enough affection and care of parents.But in our society women are superior attend

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their children.

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, both have qualities that should be learned by their kids.