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The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many. However, there are some who argue that it is actually destroying our communication skill. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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As the consequence of tremendously improving technology, cell phones, computers and these gadgets providing an exquisite ways for
communication
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 online through Facebook, WhatsApp, email, video call and by so. According to
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 it is considered by some that these are the fabulous and effective ways due to myriad merits. Whereas, some intend that it can be a prime reason of destruction of
communication
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 skill. I think that both aspects should be
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
.
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am in favour of online
communication
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. Overuse of technology products for talking purpose
can be affect
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can affect
can be affected
 significantly
negative
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negatively
 on users because if they tend to spend
time
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 behind phone for chatting and for conversation, they would be more likely to have motionless talk and poor speaking ability as they don't need to show feelings during chatting and online conversation. Due to
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 they will not be able to do
communication
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 effectively and efficiently, which can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 negatively on their career.
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, for good job everyone need to give interviews where they will face failure due to lack of
communication
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 skill which is the major requirement of any job place. In contradiction, technological products are the most reliable and helpful devices to have a great conversation as people can talk with anybody who is living near or too far.
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 as, if a person is in
U
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
.S.A, he/she can talk with British
(
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UK
)
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person very easily and without hesitation.
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, it is
also
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 very convenient for businessmen as they have very busy schedules. By which they are not able to meet personally, which can
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 save their
time
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 and can have
time
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 for relaxation which
time
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 they can spend by talking with family members. In conclusion, due to above mentioned good points,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 strongly deem that it can not threat on people's
communication
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 skill and can provide a number of other amnesties.

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