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"The qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

#qualities #person #world #university #institution #disagree？
It's been a debatable concern since
along
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a long
 a period of
time whether
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time, whether
 a person should be entitled
for
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to
higher
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a higher education, education
a higher education education
education
education
 or not to be successful in
present world
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the present world
. It's my firm belief that University or equivalent
accademic
associated with academia or an academy
academic
 institute plays a role up to a certain extent in producing an
acompalished
highly skilled
accomplished
 human being. In
this
 essay, I will justify my opinion with evidences.
First
 and foremost determining factor for growth in
life
 are the intrinsic human values.These
gets
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are getting
have got
 imbibed by many sources like parents, social network along with
life
 circumstances.To illustrate, many
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
 people from
myriad
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the myriad
a myriad
 of different walks of
life
 like science,
sprituality
property or income owned by a church
spirituality
 and environment etc.
have
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Have
 never attended the tertiary
education
. On the other hand, graduates from many prestigious institutes have been been seen tempted to wrong deeds and eventually ruining their lives.
As a result
, moral values
is
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are
 a deterministic factor.
Moreover
, it is an individual's courage and determination which plays a major role on the path to
acompalished
 being. To solve
the bigger
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the big
 challenges of
life
, it takes a lot of patience and
preservance
 which no contemporary higher
education
 provides.To exemplify, many new entrepreneurs from all across the world who achieved success by ardently and persistently working passionately.
Moreover
, natural born instincts
has
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have
 a bit of its part in
this
 distinctive journey. To conclude, higher
education
 is very
condusive
tending to bring about; being partly responsible for
conducive
 to make a person, albeit it is the human values and individual's characteristics are more deterministic factors which ultimately leads them to be an
accompalished
highly skilled
accomplished
 person.
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