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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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An increasing number of
mode
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modes
 of transportation are nowadays available to travel around the world.
This
 has created a way for the various kinds of people,
for instance
, scientists and tourists, to reach the countryside or village, specifically south pole, where it riches in natural resources.
This
 essay will discuss how
this
 improvement could impact the environment and surroundings of those places. On the one hand,
this
 development would bring a benefit to the people who travel to those areas as it could give an opportunity for them to spend the time away from their busy urban life. Having said that,
this
 could facilitate them to relax and rest their mind as it is significantly important to function effectively at work or school. Specifically, scientists and researchers not only get
this
 chance to release their work
tension but
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tension, but
also
 it would provide a pathway for them to explore about those areas, which may contribute to
further development
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the further development
 of those places.
However
, for a good reason,
this
 would be worrying issues
.
Accept space
.
This
 is because a growing number of people
movement
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moving
to
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in
 those remote areas would drastically disturb the natural environment. One of the possible damage that can be caused by humans is increasing usage of fossil fuels due to the rising number of vehicles there.
As a result
, emission of greenhouse gases will
possibily
by chance
possibly
 shoot up
,
Accept space
,
thus
 leading to
the rise temperature
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the rise in temperature
, which causes to increase the sea level.
Subsequently
, biodiversity of those areas could be destructed. All in all, by considering the global warming,
this
 would not be a good notion. In conclusion, while it is true that it would open a road to explore the new area for the future enhancement, it will potentially harmful to the nature, given
considearation
the process of giving careful thought to something
consideration
 to the past man-made disasters.
Therefore
, I would suggest that before implementing that idea, it would be better to make a precautionary step in terms of protecting those areas.
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