Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People are created differently and each
have
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has
their own characteristics and thoughts. Some may choose to pick friends who are most similar to them while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
may choose to pick friends who
most different
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most difference
to them. On one side, there are people who prefer to have friends who share the same idea. For most obvious reason, these people
have less debate
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have less debated
with their friends and for sure,
this
leads to longer and stronger relationship.
Similarly
, these
group
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groups
have similar hobbies and lifestyles. If someone likes to go to cinema or spend time visiting historical places at his weekend, he will have has
easier job
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an easier job
the easier job
convincing a friend who has the same interest and obviously,
this
is the important advantage for those with limited time or options. On the opposing side, there are people who share the idea that friends should not have identical thinking style.
certainly
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Certainly
, for
first reason
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the first reason
first reasons
, friends with different mindset have
different view of angle
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a different angle of view
a different view of angle
different views of angle
for various topics and
this
feature,
for example
, helps them to consider other possibilities when tackling an issue as
having opposing idea assists
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will oppose idea assist
will opposing idea assist
to develop and mature their ideas.
in
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In
addition,
such
friendship can
more adventurous
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more adventures
for them because
such
friendship gave them the opportunity to discover new possibilities. To sum up, people may decide to have friends who share the same belief or have different one for any reason.
However
, I believe taking rigid and strong side is an absolute mistake and best is to take balance approach. I think we both group of individuals are necessary for us as there are both advantages and disadvantages with them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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