The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.

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In
this
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contemporary era, I completely agree that
internet
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the internet
plays
major role
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a major role
in our
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
. There are so much information available
in
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on
the internet, all people are addicted to social networks.
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, all are using Television like basic need. Nowadays, we
can not
can not
cannot
find a house without television all kinds of people are watching regularly. In television there are so many individual channels like comedy, news, movies and sports etc. In school, teachers are using
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PowerPoint
presentations and some technology to educate children in a
best
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good
better
way.
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, people are connecting with the use of social networking sites like
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Facebook
,
watsapp
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and
instagram
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etc.
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, we are connecting our childhood friends merely by their name even though we are not in a same place. There are
plethora
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a plethora
of applications and websites are available in our current market.
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The internet
is not only for
entertainment but
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entertainment, but
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for
education we
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education, we
are using so many useful applications,
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web sites
.
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, if you search for a job there are so many websites like Linkedin, Indeed, Monster etc. The Internet
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is not only permitted
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in
developed cities, very
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least period
of time it is available in rural areas
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. To recapitulate, with the support of
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the internet
we are communicating all over the world irrespective of age. The Internet makes our life easier and
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we are socializing easily irrespective of time, gender and age.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • instantaneous communication
  • vast distances
  • maintaining relationships
  • professional connections
  • face-to-face meetings
  • in-person communication skills
  • local friendships
  • social isolation
  • community events
  • niche interests
  • like-minded people
  • virtual relationships
  • emotional connection
  • feelings of loneliness
  • superficial friendships
  • overly reliant
  • real-world relationships
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