the graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007

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in Canada during the period between the years

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1992 to 2006. In general, we can observe that number of graduates in both genders is

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steeply

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growth

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declined relatively from 1996 to about 1999,

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had back to recovery in 2006. In early 1992 we can notice how

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males’ number increased from 70,000

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about 77.000 students in 1995. After that, the rate

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fluctuated from 1995 to 2005, ending up with a sudden surge again. Looking at the graduated females, when it comes to 1992 to 2006 it is noticeable that the rate starts and ends in a sharply climbed.

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the period from 1995 to 1999 the number had a slightly fell down.