Nowadays public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved?

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In the modern world, the cost of public movement continues to grow, causing various kinds of problems for the general public. Some people believe that fossil fuel is costly, and it is the main cause of

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issue.

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, environmental taxes and unstable economic growth are the other factors which are affecting

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transportation fees. Personally, I believe that introducing alternative types of

vehicle

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vehicles

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as solar or

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buses and cabins can alleviate the problem. On the one hand,

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the administrative expenses of the

companies

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may cause an expensive bus and train ticket price. In

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regard, many

companies

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are keen to pay increments and bonuses

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the directors of the

companies

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, an LRT company in Nur-sultan have paid high salaries to the finance directors in the past decade.

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, it influenced

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the price of transportation fees.

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, the things which influence

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the cost are inflation and environmental taxes.

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, introducing vehicles, which

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its independence

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oil and gasses, these kinds of public transport are able to reduce the level of environmental toxic gasses

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as carbon dioxide too.

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, motivating people to use public transport can be another solution.

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to say, more customers mean more income for the

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accordingly

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, the worth of tickets will be reduced. In conclusion, it is true that many people daily use public transport, the transportation fees are expensive because of the high salaries of administrative workers.

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, new types of vehicles can alleviate

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issue.

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, the greatest number of customers is able to bring more revenue.

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Task Response: The essay slightly deviates from the task by focusing more on the internal factors affecting the cost of public transport. It should address both the causes of increasing prices and the solutions in more depth.

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Coherence and Cohesion: The essay demonstrates a clear introduction and conclusion. The logical structure is evident, but the development of the main points lacks depth and coherence. Consider providing more detailed supporting examples to improve coherence.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

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