Many countries consider eighteen-year-olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience.

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In today's
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the
age
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for
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of
adulthood
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varies from one country to another.
while
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While
a number of countries hold eighteen years as the right
age
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for
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to
adulthood
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, others dispute with
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. But is
age
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the absolute metric to decide
adulthood
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? I believe that
age
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should not be the only
criterea
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
criteria
criterion
to label an individual as an adult.
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essay will
first
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analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
both camps and point out the flaws in the current
age
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based systems and later suggest a better
way
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to decide
adulthood
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.
Firstly
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, from a biological perspective development of an individual is heavily dependent on factors like the
diet they
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diet, they
consume and the climate they live in. These factors directly impact the production of testosterone and
estrogen
a general term for female steroid sex hormones that are secreted by the ovary and responsible for typical female sexual characteristics
oestrogen
, which are two of the major hormones responsible for
adulthood
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, in a human being
there by
by that means or because of that
thereby
affecting their mental and physical growth.
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, according to a study conducted by
American Health Association
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the American Health Association
a sample of 100 16 year old girls from
texas
the second largest state; located in southwestern United States on the Gulf of Mexico
Texas
showed the same level of physical and emotional maturity as 18 year olds from 10 other states in the USA, which led to the Texas government reducing the legal
age
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of marriage to 16. Unfortunately, the purely
age
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based qualification system among countries does not take all these factors into account and
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are flawed in a
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and needs improvement.
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, a better
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would be if the governments around the
world
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start considering their citizens on an individual basis and not set an
age
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for
adulthood
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.
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, authorities around the
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can design a test which would assess an individual's mental and physical maturity level, and label them as adults based on their test scores.
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would be fruitful to both the society and individuals in numerous ways. To name one benefit, qualified adults will be taking part in voting resulting
in capable
(followed by 'of') lacking capacity or ability
incapable
leaders.
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Thus countries
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Thus, countries
around the
world
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should not only depend on
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and follow a more efficient method as mentioned above. To conclude,
age
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based systems are not the most optimal
way
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to determine
adulthood
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and the idea of setting
age
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be
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is
it 18 or any number above for
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cannot be supported.
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Thus those
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Thus, those
in charge should move on to new methods like test based systems.
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