Many countries consider eighteen-year-olds to be adults, while other countries don’t. What do you think about it? Give your opinion and some relevant examples based on your own experience.

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Certainly,
age
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of
majority
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is
very important issue
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a very important issue
in any society at all times. Meanwhile, countries
do not have unified
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are not unified
approach
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for
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problem. Many countries consider
eighteen
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year
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olds to be adults.
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, some countries establish another
age
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as maturity. I agree with
global trend
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the global trend
of
majority
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age
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at
eighteen
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, but I understand that
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issue can have
different
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different approaches
a different approach
approach
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. Nowadays law in most countries
install
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installs
sets the
age
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of
majority
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at
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of
eighteen
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. Exactly in
this
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age
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people get legal rights and duties.
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approach
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is consistent
to
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with
modern life, because in
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age
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people have social, physical, mental and emotional conditions for it. People have a longer life
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then
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than
,
for example
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, in
Middle ages
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the Middle ages
, and can
became
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become
adults later.
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, at
eighteen
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people usually start their adult life. They go to university or college, have independent home, get
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first job
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the first job
a first job
.
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, people's social positions, moral ideas are formed.
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, I believe that issue of
age
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of
majority
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has national, traditional and cultural aspects.
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, in the Faeroe islands
this
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age
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is fourteen, in Indonesia - fifteen, in Japan - twenty, in Egypt and some States of America - twenty-one. I think that countries can independently establish
this
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age
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, because it is important
for
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in
the electoral process, military service, marriage. But I am concerned if
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age
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the age
of
majority
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is too small.
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, in some Islamic and African
countries
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country
girls eight or nine
year
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olds can be considered adults, and boys - at the
age
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of ten or eleven
year
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olds. I believe that
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approach
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prevents protection of children and childhood. In conclusion,
age
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of
majority
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can be different in countries with different social, cultural and economic conditions. Presently
eighteen
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year
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old is
common
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a common age
the common age
age
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of people maturation.
Besides
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, in recent times politicians and sociologists have even considered increasing
this
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age
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.
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