Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the box is considered by many people like a dangerous
sport
because it often causes physical injuries. The practice
of this
exercise should not exist anymore. I argued that the box should be forbidden because it promotes violence
and cause
the death of many people. In this
essay, I will discuss both parts of this
question and give several reasons to support my point-views.
First
of all, boxing can cause
physical damages. Indeed, the objective of this
sport
is to fight with its opponent. Consequently
, it results with injuries and a lot of blood diversed
. For this
reason, the athets
should respect some a person trained to compete in sports
athletes
atheists
artists
roles
during the rings. a principle or condition that customarily governs behavior
rules
For example
, they cannot not tuch
the head of their opponent and could not continue to hit if make physical contact with, come in contact with
touch
this
one is inconscious
. Suggestion
in conscious
However
, even if it is a sport
, many people use it to hit someone without respecting any of this
quoted roles. In fact, it could cause
the death of an individu
if it is not managed properly. I think that it helps people to think that the box and the a human being
individual
violence
behind this
sport
could be the solution to all their problems.
Moreover
, government
should Suggestion
the government
forbide
the command against
forbid
forbade
forbids
practice
of this
exercise. Generally, people practice
Suggestion
have practiced
this
it because they would like to become stronger than everyone. they
thinking way is due to the history of Suggestion
They
this
exercise, tradionally
it was organised by different kings to divert according to tradition; in a traditional manner
traditionally
themselve
. I believe that today people should think differently by promoting peace than reflexive form of "them"
themselves
violence
. For instance
, in France only people with a psychological certificate can do this
sport
. So, the government should forbide
command against
forbid
this
sport
, particularly for people who do not use it in the right way.
In conclusion, the boxe
is often associated with a (usually rectangular) container; may have a lid
box
books
violence
and uncultural
not in accordance with or determined by nature; contrary to nature
unnatural
sport
. Its practice
can cause
physical injuries. It also
should be forbidden by the government because many people does not use
it in the right way.Suggestion
do not use
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