In the past when students did a univeristy degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas knowledge and experience and support arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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In the current epoch, students generally opt for studying abroad as compared to pursuing education in their own countries.

This

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trend is associated with both negative and positive aspects

such

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as primarily loss of k

nowledgable

highly educated; having extensive information or understanding

knowledgeable

task force of the country, whereas, the student’s p

refering

like better; value more highly

preferring

migration would have p

lethora

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a plethora

of options to choose the stream of their choice, which is not available natively. U

ndenaibly,

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Undeniably

the major fallback for the nation from which the students migrate is the loss of studious and hardworking young generation. A

ditionally,

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Additionally

the local universities l

oose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

the financial benefits, if the students do not tend to study in their own motherlands.

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results in affecting the n

ations both

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nations, both

morally and economically.

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, a recent report from the I

nterntional

any of several international socialist organizations

International

Education services board in England highlighted that the youngsters from developing nations are migrating at a rate of 47.8% annually, which would prodigiously impact the GDP of these countries in the mere future. If

such

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trend continues, than the days are not far that there will not be sufficient work force available to drive these thriving economies ahead.

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, despite of a

formentioned

being the one previously mentioned or spoken of

aforementioned

disadvantages there are cardinal advantages linked with the option of chance to study abroad.

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, students could choose the stream they like from the plenty of domains available globally.

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would motivate them to pursue immense h

ardwork

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hard work

and attain their goals with flying colours.

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, the quality of education provided in c

etain

definite but not specified or identified

certain

countries too remarkable,

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herefore tend

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therefore, tends

therefore tends

to choose these countries for higher education.

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, studies in the automobile field are m

ost advanced

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more advanced

in Germany

as a result

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, students interested in

this

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particular subject prefer to move to

this

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country from all the corners of the world. In conclusion, there are benefits and setbacks associated with

this

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ongoing trend of studying in another c

ountry but

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country, but

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ast

the superlative of 'little' that can be used with mass nouns and is usually preceded by 'the'; a quantifier meaning smallest in amount or extent or degree

least

the d

ecission

the act of making up your mind about something

decision

to move or not is completely i

ndivdual

a human being

individual

based which could not be challenged.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

316 words

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