Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Massive immigration over the
last
twenty years have influenced the cultural environment of many countries and cosmopolitan cities. This
change created a vast array of cultures, languages and religions, which are living together in the same city
. Consequently
. multiculturalism
has been a matter of great debate over the Suggestion
Multiculturalism
last
decade, and there have been numerous attempts to address this
issue in order to allow people to live harmoniously. In the following essay, I will provide possible solutions for this
special situation.
Education is one of the most important tools in order to create a stable and equal society. When people are uneducated in regards to different cultural, religious and social beliefs, fear and suspicion may rise
, which can have a negative impact on the come into existence; take on form or shape
arise
citie's
daily life. By promoting educational programs that teach about different Suggestion
city's
cities
site's
sites
culturs
and religions, citizens become more open minded and tolerant. According to the New York Times, a particular society at a particular time and place
cultures
for example
, California has implemented a course teaching people spanish
. the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
Consequently
, hate acts agains
the in contact with
against
spanish
community has decreased by 5%. the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
This
illustrates, that education can improve the communication between different culturs
and promote harmony.
Another way to a particular society at a particular time and place
cultures
promot
social equality, is by maintaining the safety of all cultures and religions. When people are afraid to practice their religion, they become hostile, frustrated and even violent. By securing the religious contribute to the progress or growth of
promote
freedome
of all citizens, regardless of their origin, people feel safe and can connect to the the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints
freedom
freedoms
city
and the local society. In Jerusalem, for example
, the city
allocated 10% of its expenditure to secure the religious freedome
of its citizens. the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints
freedom
freedoms
As a result
, 30% of the people reported they feel connected to the city
, and would keep living in it. This
demonstrates, that religious freedome
is a valuable aspect in maintaining the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints
freedom
multicultralism
.
In conclusion, education and the doctrine that several different cultures (rather than one national culture) can coexist peacefully and equitably in a single country
multiculturalism
freedome
of religion are two aspects which may assist in keeping the harmony in a cosmopolitan the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints
freedom
city
. By doing so people will feel safe to maintain their culture, and at the same time learn about new ways and cultures.Submitted by chilafp on
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