Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Nowadays multiple
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Nowadays, multiple
ads are there
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for
the media to lure people and in promoting there product companies
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
forget about the norms of that
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for whom they are making those ads. I am personally against all those uncivilised adds on media which can influence the
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a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interests
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.
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essay will discuss the potential damages, these ads are making on the cultures using examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey to demonstrate points and support claims.
Firstly
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, every nation has a limit to see the
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of
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on media.
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why a
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of expression is acceptable in one country but thought as obscene in another
society
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because of the norms on which that
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is based.
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, according to a research done by Oxford University in the year 2015 on the
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of
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showcased in
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ads and it is psychologically proven that too much violence and obscene material in the ads lead to more violence and rape in the
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because people start idealizing these ads sometimes and try to adopt that fashion and
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of violence which is shown in the media in the form of ads. So, it's better that media shows
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content
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which is acceptable in that particular country.
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, every
culture
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has its norms on which that
society
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is based. So, if we try to manipulate that
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with the norms of another
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society there
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society, there
would be a chance that it spread anarchy in that
society
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and mass killings spread because of that particular ad which is showcased in the media.
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, Time magazine in 2016 surveyed the ad effects on multiple cultures of the world and it came to the conclusion that if we limit our
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of ads we will save
ourself
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yourself
from the incidents like Rawanda Mass killing etc. So in order to avoid any
angerness
partiality that is not fair or equitable
unfairness
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society its
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society, its
better to show that material which represents the
culture
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of that country. To conclude, nowadays media ads are trying to enforce another
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on
people which
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people, which
is not acceptable to most people. And if we want to avoid any incidents its better to make strong policies and the media is bound to showcase only that material
that is
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acceptable. Once these strict media policies are applied
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to
the ads
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,
the popularity of
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ads will grow in those people as well, who don't like media because of its bold behaviour.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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