Many People prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should government give more financial support to local industries?

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for foreign movies rather than those produced domestically. Some are of the opinion that G

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the Government

ought to increase financial contributions to motion picture section and I completely agree as

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will increase the demand for these films. Perhaps the most significant reason why internationally produced movies travails more can be attributed to a solid s

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most overseas films portray their Stories in a realistic, captivating, and impressive way

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that its denial is would seem outrageous. To exemplify

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, AAMAA awards organizers,

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highly reputable organisation that spans across African s

ubregion

conducted a survey that revealed that 95% of the Nigerian population believed that American motion pictures are inspired by true life stories.

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, so far as the overseas movies represent excellence in executing their movie role, they will continue to win the hearts of our people.

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strongly subscribe to the idea that more funds should be allocated to

this

aspect of entertainment because it will enable them to purchase high technological equipment which will have a resultant positive effect on the quality of audiovisual outcome that will be produced

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in- turn will

subsequently

increase the overall numbers of people that will purchase the movie. According to a survey carried put by the Vanguard newspaper, a reputable media house in Nigeria, revealed that many people derive pleasure in watching good quality home videos.

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, allocating more money in the industry will have a tremendous effect. In conclusion, despite p

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attachment to movies that are not of n

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origin, I believe with high quality technology through proper funding,

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he sky will be the starting point for our locally made movies.

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Many People prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should government give more financial support to local industries?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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