Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both vies and state your opinion?
The
more you earn more
, the less you have Suggestion
more you earn
time
for other activities is a norm accepted by most of the earning people of the world. But is it an acceptable strategy or the opposite will be Use synonyms
the best
to spend our lives. Suggestion
better
This
essay will Linking Words
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
this
situation using the examples of Oxford University research and Linking Words
Time
magazine survey in order to demonstrate points and support claims.
On the one hand, people concentrate more on earning livelihood Use synonyms
therefore
compromising on the Linking Words
time
which they are supposed to give to their friends or family members. Their ultimate goal is to become rich so that they can purchase every happiness of the world. Use synonyms
For example
, an Oxford University research in 2015 clearly indicates that it is psychologically proven that people feel safe if they have more in their bank accounts because they think that it is the only way which help them in their trouble times. So, it is clear from Linking Words
this
that people rely more on the power of the wealth rather than their family times which they consider a useless activity.
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On the other hand
, there are some who advocate that leisure Linking Words
time
is Use synonyms
preferable and
would not be compromised in any scenario. They think that we are here in Accept comma addition
preferable, and
this
world to enjoy its beauties and comforts and we can’t purchase very thing especially family Linking Words
time
or precious friends. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
Time
Magazine in 2016 conducted a survey on the value of office Use synonyms
time
as compared to family Use synonyms
time
or leisure Use synonyms
time
and 60% public voted in the Use synonyms
favor
of giving promote over another
favour
time
to your loved ones is more important than giving Use synonyms
time
to your office. From Use synonyms
this
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survey it
is clear that we can buy properties but wealth of love is not purchasable by any worldly resources other than to find out some valuable Accept comma addition
survey, it
time
for yourself or family.
To conclude, I personally believe that leisure Use synonyms
time
and earning Use synonyms
time
both are important factors to live a balanced life and we cannot ignore any factor as it is explained in both examples. So if a person Use synonyms
do
justice with the Suggestion
does
time
for the loved ones and Use synonyms
time
for the business deals, he will live a more balanced life.Use synonyms
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