Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue people should simply live in the moment. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, more and more people worry about their

future

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aspirations. Some believe that

such

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planning is a waste of time and that one should simply live in the present. I strongly disagree with

this

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notion because not having a

future

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roadmap can make individuals go off track and

then

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there is nothing to look forward to.

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, the era we live in is very competitive and evolving every

second

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. To sustain in

such

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an environment we should all have a goal plan -- small goals, short-term goals, and long-term goals.

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, to

acheive

to gain with effort

achieve

them there should be an action taken on a daily

basis which

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basis, which

leads one to reach their aspirations in the

future

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, Virat Kohli went vegan from 2017 to reach a body mass index he wanted to

acheive

to gain with effort

achieve

by 2019. Basically, planned, consistent and regular actions should be taken to reach the desired level in the

future

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, in the quest to acquire these futuristic goals people tend to not enjoy the day-to-day activities.

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in addition

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, they

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about what they want to have rather than cherishing what they already have.

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, health, family, children are never to be ignored to worry about the

future

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because eventually health may deteriorate, family moves away and children grow older so these times may never come back.

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future

Suggestion

the future

is a very tricky place, there are things which

are beyond are

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have beyond been

are beyond are

control

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controlled

and are unpredictable.

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, it is only advisable to enjoy the moment and have immense gratitude. To conclude, I still believe that though living in the moment is

important but

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important, but

having a futuristic mindset should hold more importance in terms of planning and if done without worrying too much

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

it leads to a successful

future

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

289 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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