Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue people should simply live in the moment. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more people worry about their
future
aspirations. Some believe that
such
planning is a waste of time and that one should simply live in the present. I strongly disagree with
this
notion because not having a
future
roadmap can make individuals go off track and
then
there is nothing to look forward to.
Firstly
, the era we live in is very competitive and evolving every
second
. To sustain in
such
an environment we should all have a goal plan -- small goals, short-term goals, and long-term goals.
Secondly
, to
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
them there should be an action taken on a daily
basis which
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basis, which
leads one to reach their aspirations in the
future
.
For example
, Virat Kohli went vegan from 2017 to reach a body mass index he wanted to
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
by 2019. Basically, planned, consistent and regular actions should be taken to reach the desired level in the
future
.
Conversely
, in the quest to acquire these futuristic goals people tend to not enjoy the day-to-day activities.
Morever
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Moreover
, they
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about what they want to have rather than cherishing what they already have.
For example
, health, family, children are never to be ignored to worry about the
future
because eventually health may deteriorate, family moves away and children grow older so these times may never come back.
Furthermore
,
future
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the future
is a very tricky place, there are things which
are beyond are
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have beyond been
are beyond are
control
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controlled
and are unpredictable.
Finally
, it is only advisable to enjoy the moment and have immense gratitude. To conclude, I still believe that though living in the moment is
important but
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important, but
having a futuristic mindset should hold more importance in terms of planning and if done without worrying too much
then
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than
it leads to a successful
future
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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