A friend has agreed to look after your six year old son, house and pet while you are working abroad for two weeks. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give instructions about your son with his everyday school routine • give instructions about how to care for your pet • give instructions about other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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It is irrefutable that music relaxes your nerves and helps in getting rid of stress. While there are many people who believe that folk music and single tracks are important for the music industry, others believe that playing songs online and downloading is more appropriate. In

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of my son, house and pet for the

two weeks, starting tomorrow. I

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wanted to update you regarding my son's schedule. He usually wakes up around 7:30, an hour before his bus comes to pick him. I have already got the grocery for the time I will be away. He is fine getting cereals and milk by himself. His school is from 9 AM till 2 PM and comes back home around 2:30. He is served lunch in school, so you should not be worried about lunch. The pets mostly stay in the garden, as it is summer and have a separate room outside of the house. You might have to provide them food around 12 PM, they are trained for everything else.

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, an evening walk is something they love to do around 6 in the evening. I know you love evening walks too, so should not be a problem for you. Other than these, there are few favors regarding household, I would need from you.

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, we have been having plumbing issue in the upper guest room. Plumber will visit on coming Thursday around 1 PM.

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, there was an electricity bill due, which I forgot to pay. It would be great if you can do the payments. I will transfer the amount on my return. Thank you again for helping me out with these 2 weeks. I am sure I can return the favor in some time near future. Regards, Pranam

Sun Dec 08 2019

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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9 paragraphs

320 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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