Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Now a days

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Nowadays

, the

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between students are

become

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becoming

natural because of some of the educational institutions and the parents.There were mixed opinions about the

competition

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between students. The healthy

competition

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leads to a good career.

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, the high

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in

the education create

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education creates the

the education creates

problems

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in

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their life as well. In

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essay, I will explain my opinion about both the healthy and unhealthy

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based on my knowledge. The

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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

side of the

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make

students

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the students

to grow

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grow

faster in the knowledge.In

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approach, they can learn the subjects by co-

operating each other

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operating with each other

. When students start learning in

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way

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way, then

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they have more learning scope from others.

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, Pair programming was introduced recently in the software development.I am

also

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part of that in my

last

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project development.When

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I

did developed

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did develop

have developed

with my friend I am very sure

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

did

learned

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learn

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connects a noun with the preceding word

of

new things from him as well as my friend

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the same. Coming to the other side of

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, There were more incidents happened in the schools because of the

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between the schools not between the students.In

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digital world, the parents and the institutions forced their

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

to participate in multiple aspects without their interest.With

lack

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the lack

of interest students are not able to

affend

come upon, as if by accident; meet with

find

the

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and it leads to suicides.

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Likewise

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In India some of the survey's noticed that most of the students are not able to concentrate on their interested subjects due to the

competition

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with outside the world. In conclusion, The parents have to take inputs from their

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

on what they want?

and

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And

encourage them to move

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on wanted things. And the institutions

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motivate children and give suggestions to handle the

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competition

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competition, then

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eventhough

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even though

they have

lot

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lots

of pressure with

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they will survive and continue

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.