Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.

The graph shows the underground
passengers
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passenger
number
in
london
the capital and largest city of England; located on the Thames in southeastern England; financial and industrial and cultural center
London
city from 6:00am to 10:00 pm. As it is observed the highest
number
of people using underground is between 6:00 am to 8:00 am. As it is shown in that graph,
number
of passengers are increasing starting at 6:00 am from 100 passengers to 400 passengers at 8:00,
then
the
number
declines steadily till 10:00 am to less than 200 passengers. It
also
noticed that the
number
of people using underground increase again to around 300 passengers
at
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in
200 until
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
decline to at 4:00 pm with 100 passengers.
People
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Person
number
using underground fluctuate up and down till it
reach
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reaches
another peak at 6:00 with almost 400 passengers

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • poverty alleviation
  • economic inequality
  • developing nations
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable growth
  • technical assistance
  • expertise
  • infrastructure
  • education
  • fair trade
  • trade barriers
  • sustainable development
  • environmental conservation
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