""Prevention is better than cure."" Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It goes without saying that Precaution is better than cure and,

thus

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, many people believe that the

government

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should allocate a major portion of its

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healthcare

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health care

budget

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to

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awareness campaign

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an awareness campaign

and

precaution

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the precaution

at

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of

the cost of spending on

treatment

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. Personally, I do not consent to the hilt as

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practice will cause huge damage to the already affected people by one or more disease and delay their

treatment

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. Notwithstanding,

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discourse will delve into both perspectives,

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essay will put forward the arguments to support my opinion. From one perspective, the supporters of higher

healthcare

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treatment

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budget

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see the major effects of cutting down on

budget

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from

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segment on the poor people who caught by the diseases that require costly treatments.

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,

this

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will directly affect the

treatment

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of the

major

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majority

population

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of the country which consist of lower income families

where

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

as high income class can afford the

treatment

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at

nonsubsidised

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centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

Centers

.

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, despite the

awareness

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and care, many people

are affecting

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are affected

with some diseases due to the bad weather condition or an unhealthy

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

.

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, as per Indian health research

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

, 20% of the people were affected by the

cancer despite

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cancer, despite

continuous

awareness

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campaign in 2018, and only 50% of them could get the benefits of

treatment

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through

government

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subsidies.

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,

this

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reduction

on

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in

of

to

treatment

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budget

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will result in poor health care facilities in the country

as a result

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of poor infrastructures and lack of expert doctors.

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will be the case as the

government

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may not be able to retain the expert doctors with

high

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higher

pay due to less financial resources. Apart from the existing facilities requirement of regular maintenance to keep it in good shape.

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, due to increase in

population

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and to provide medical facilities

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in

the areas previously not available, the

government

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has to set up new infrastructures to have the basic health care services for

major portion

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a major portion

the major portion

of the citizen. According to the survey

of

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by

the World Medical Association, 45% of the world

population

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are deprived of the basic

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healthcare

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health care

facility to treat the disease. In conclusion, I dissent from the view of diverting the huge

budget

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from the

treatment

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of diseases to the

awareness

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and prevention segment as it will cost to the significantly

high

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higher

portion of the

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population which

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population, which

have low income and on

other hand

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the other hand

it will deteriorate the quality of the

healthcare

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services

instead

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of improving it.