environmental problems such as pollution and climate variation are increasing nowadays. the government have take some measures at a global level. but they only get a few solution .why it is so? how can this problem be solved ?

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In some cities, public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own food and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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