environmental problems such as pollution and climate variation are increasing nowadays. the government have take some measures at a global level. but they only get a few solution .why it is so? how can this problem be solved ?

Nowadays environmental problem increase day
by day like,
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by day, like
pollution
and climate variation are increasing at a great rate.The
government
help take some measures
at
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on
a global level.
what
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What
are
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is
the reason behind
this
?
and
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And
how can
this
problem be solved?
In
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At
this
present time there are two major problems,
pollution
and
second
one
is climate
variations
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variance
variable
.A key reason is the large
number
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amount
of air
pollution
in
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from
this
more use of
vehicle
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the vehicle
a vehicle
just because of it polluted air increasing and
thus
are
damage
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damaged
environment
continuously
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continuing
continuous
. Another
one
is industrial
pollution
.
Nowadays more
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Nowadays, more
and more industrial area are
increase
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increasing
in
this
global.
This
industries
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Industries
smoke very harmful for
environment
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the environment
. In
this
present time people
wants
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want
a
comfortf
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comfortable
comfort
comfort f
and they use air conditioner at workplace as well as their resident. In
this
situation it
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situation, it
necessary to take
such
steps by
government
like,
government
should arrange some awareness programmes for
student
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students
the student
. In
this
spred
distribute or disperse widely
spread
knowledge about tree plantation, just because of
this
decrease the level of carbon dioxide. Another
one
government
take
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takes
steps related residential area or industrial area and reducing deforestation. Take
such
step like, PUC compulsory for vehicle
a part
separated or at a distance in place or position or time
apart
from that charge set amount of penalty if anyone
not follow
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doesn't follow
this
rule.Not only
government but
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government, but
individuals should use public transport rather than private if possible. In conclusion, if
such
type of steps taken by the
government
then
it poof very crucial for the society as well as
environment
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the environment
.Not only
government
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governments
the government
but school, organization and individuals
also
one
part of a society and the understanding their
responsibilities
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responsibilities, then
then
it
it is
it's
possible to reduce
pollution
as well as save the
environment
.
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