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Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or a negative development.

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In recent years, telecommuting has become more accessible for people thank to affordable computer technologies. I tend to agree that
such
 kind of method of
work
 and study is beneficial for adults and children respectively. The principal reason why mobile workplace
is better choose
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is better choosing
is better chosen
is better to choose
 rather than staying at the office is that it can save employees’ money for getting to
work
 and
also
 expenses on the lunch.
Moreover
,
one
 should add that living in
megapolis
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Megapolis
 like Moscow
one
 can obviously face problem with tremendous traffic jams. It is
waste
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a waste
 of
time
.
and
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And
 it would be better to
spent
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spend
 it
on
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at
work
. Some people usually spent approximately 4 hours a day on the road in Moscow.
Furthermore
, flexible working hours
is
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are
one
 more positive side. Being free of
time
 schedule gives people opportunity to plan own day or week in accordance with their own preferences, it
may includes
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may include
 preferable
time
 to
work
, needed day off. There are several apparent advantages of studying from home. The most significant is that children who learning at home cannot be disturbed by someone wasting
time
 on
fun stuff
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the fun stuff
 as it might be at school. While being at home youngs may concentrate on the studying process and deeply learn preferable subjects.
Additionally
, it
provide
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provides
has provided
 opportunity to avoid being bullied by classmates.
As a result
 of it,
one
 can observe persons creating strong character, self esteem, developing personality and other vital skills. In conclusion, I firmly believe that remote
work
 and study give people a great number of advantages to live better and do not waste life
time
. After
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 the subject it has become quite evident that telecommuting will be increase its popularity where it is possible to apply.
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