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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars. To what extent do you agree?

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid
community
work
instead
 of being put behind the bars and I completely agree with
this
 statement. I believe prisoners should be given
community
 tasks
such
 as serving patients in the
community
 hospital, doing
work
 at the old age homes, cleaning tasks
at
Suggestion
in
 the
community
 schools etc.
This
 way the prisoners can build their trust and reputation, getting
firsthand
Suggestion
first hand
 experience of the society. It is
oftten
many times at short intervals
often
 seen that a convicted person finds it difficult, almost
imposible
not capable of occurring or being accomplished or dealt with
impossible
 to find a job after their release. Engaging prisoners in social and
community
 services would help prisoners have some sort of
community
 experience and it would be useful for them to find a job. The government can
also
 later hire these prisoners looking at their experience and interest.
This
 would ensure employment and growth for the prisoners. Government can
shortlist according
Accept comma addition
shortlist, according
 to the
work
 a prisoner has done. To sum
this
 up, I would say
governmennt
Suggestion
the government
government
governments
 should
definately
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
 think of making prisoners do unpaid
community
work
instead
 of being put behind the bars.

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