Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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For many years, university degrees

has been been considered

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are considered

were considered

to be

of paramount if

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paramount if

one must succeed in

the the

definite article

the

society, as many feel it is the only way to get employment in a reputable organization.

However

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refers to the speaker or writer

consider university degrees as a necessity to guarantee a good job.

First

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of all, it is often said that without proper education, is it difficult to succeed. The university

provide

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provides

has provided

is providing

necessary tools in other to be well equipped and succeed in any working environment, and without the experiences gathered from the tertiary institution, it will be difficult to scale through while working,

this

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is because it provides,

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

105 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

higher education
specialized fields
job prospects
earning potential
formal education
networking opportunities
career advancement
practical skills
work environment
financial independence
high costs
skills and experience
formal education
prioritize

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Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many animals are facing extinction in the wild. Why is this happening? What can be done to protect them?

People work because they need money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above opinion? What are some other reasons that people work?

Some people think that children are having to much free time and this time should be use to study more. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays many people prefer to shop in supermarket rather than small shops or local markets? Is this positive or negative for development? Discuss and give your opinion.

Task 2 Many developed counties now have large numbers of people over the age 65 . What problems might this cause ? . How can the problems be solved