As the transportation and accommodation problem increases in big cities, some governments are encouraging the business move from the city to the rural area. Do the advantages of the outweigh the disadvantages?

Some authorities are motivating people to start new businesses in the countryside rather than stepping up in the town areas because of the less congestion and the availability of places to live.
This
essay will discuss why positive aspects of starting a business in rural areas outstrip the negative aspects. On the one hand, getting permission for starting new firms are easy in rural areas.
In other words
, nowadays, there are a plethora of regulations and rules in order to preserve the environmentally fragile areas.
Consequently
, it is very difficult to get new licences to start a business in the cities, because that place is more fragile than villages.
Moreover
, fee for permission is relatively low in Panchayat areas.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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