Gap between rich and poor countries. It's the responsibility of richer countries to support poorer countries while others think it's the responsibility of poorer countries. what is your opinion?

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Rich countries have excess of certain resources which they can certainly utilize for aiding other poor countries.

For example

, when food is provided to countries in Africa, it reduces malnutrition and starvation related deaths.

This

causes reduction in

disparity

Suggestion

disparities

the disparity

between prosperous and poor nations. There are many for profit and non-profit organizations that have embarked on projects that aim at reducing inequities in health, create better sanitation facilities and related. Some are tasked to foster and scale small scale industries aimed for sustainable economic growth. Many poor countries lack the vision, government structure and support needed to self-sustain. I think it's fair that they get the opportunity to rely on

wealthier nation

Suggestion

a wealthier nation

for basic needs

to begin

so that they have an opportunity to initiate their economic growth.

Although

, care must be taken to ensure that there is no over-dependence on resources and aid received by these countries. Along with help, these nations should

also

impart the right education and skills needed for these countries to start and scale.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

169 words

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Economic disparity
International cooperation
Financial assistance
Technology transfer
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Dependency
Sovereignty
Moral obligation
Exploitation
Strategic interests
Good governance
Anti-corruption
Institutions
Foreign aid
Fair trade
Trade barriers
Sustainable development goals
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Gap between rich and poor countries. It's the responsibility of richer countries to support poorer countries while others think it's the responsibility of poorer countries. what is your opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.