Gap between rich and poor countries. It's the responsibility of richer countries to support poorer countries while others think it's the responsibility of poorer countries. what is your opinion?

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Rich countries have excess of certain resources which they can certainly utilize for aiding other poor countries.

For example

, when food is provided to countries in Africa, it reduces malnutrition and starvation related deaths.

This

causes reduction in

disparity

Suggestion

disparities

the disparity

between prosperous and poor nations. There are many for profit and non-profit organizations that have embarked on projects that aim at reducing inequities in health, create better sanitation facilities and related. Some are tasked to foster and scale small scale industries aimed for sustainable economic growth. Many poor countries lack the vision, government structure and support needed to self-sustain. I think it's fair that they get the opportunity to rely on

wealthier nation

Suggestion

a wealthier nation

for basic needs

to begin

so that they have an opportunity to initiate their economic growth.

Although

, care must be taken to ensure that there is no over-dependence on resources and aid received by these countries. Along with help, these nations should

also

impart the right education and skills needed for these countries to start and scale.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

169 words

<40

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Economic disparity
International cooperation
Financial assistance
Technology transfer
Capacity building
Dependency
Sovereignty
Moral obligation
Exploitation
Strategic interests
Good governance
Anti-corruption
Institutions
Foreign aid
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Gap between rich and poor countries. It's the responsibility of richer countries to support poorer countries while others think it's the responsibility of poorer countries. what is your opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this iş a positive or negatife development

In some countries, children start school at the age of four, while in other countries they start at seven. What is the ideal age for a child to begin formal education

In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with poeple via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or nagative development?

In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it?

Study shows that many criminals have a low level education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?