Rather than providing sports facilities that everyone can use, some countries buy specialized sports facilities for top athletes to train. Doing this can have both negative and positive implications.

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Rather than providing sports facilities that everyone can use, some countries buy specialized sports facilities for top athletes to train. Doing
this
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can have both negative and positive implications.  There are several advantages which can be reaped from specialized sports facilities for training athletes, the most important of which is
economy
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the economy
. As for the former, having modern sports facilities provides gifted athletes with the best condition in order to push them to the limit of their abilities.
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, these people might win high prizes in international competitions. Another benefit could be that investing in sports can have many benefits
for
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of
tourism.
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means that good sports facilities
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as stadiums

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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