A government has the responsibility to ensure the safety of its citizens. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?

There is no doubt that safety is paramount to every ones health, and it is the

responsibilty

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

responsibilities

of the

government

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to ensure that safety precautions are followed

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inorder

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in order

to keep the citizens healthy.

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, many believe that the

government

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must Chanel vast amount of money on

security

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only. In

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article,

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refers to the speaker or writer

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am going to discuss while an equal proportion of money should be

chanelled

a path over which electrical signals can pass

channelled

channeled

on both

security

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and social

benefit

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. I believe if the

government

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spend

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spends

larger amount

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the larger amount

of money on

security

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and defend, it will be for the

benefit

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of the nation,

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is because currently, the crime rate is increasing globally, and more people are becoming a victim of

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wicked act. For examples, in some country, more than 40% of deaths each year is

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of

crime

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a crime

and without proper

security

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and equipment to enable the

defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

department to know who

are carrying

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is carrying

out

this

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evil act. But if the

government

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should provide enough equipment for

security

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, the death rates will be reduced, and judgement can be brought to those involving in

this

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act.

Nevertherless

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Nevertheless

, social

benefit

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should not be considered less important, because people use

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means

for

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of

relaxation, just as

its

it is

it's

often said that all works and no play, makes jack a dull boy.

Majority

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The majority

find

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finds

pleasure in social activities,

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it is mandatory that the

government

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should consider spending on

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aspect.

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Also it

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Also, it

will increase the development of children in the society In conclusion, both the defence and social

benefit

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should be considered equally, because the nation will not be able to survive without

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two aspect.