Learning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world. The teaching of foreign language should be compulsory at all primary school. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Language
is entry key which opens gates of another
world
, cultures and different societies in all around the
world
. As English is defined as
universal
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a universal language
language
which is used at majority places of the
world
so
its
it is
it's
very much essential for an individual to learn English to open new opportunities in terms of everything. Regards to that I believe that foreign
language
should be included
compulsorily
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compulsory
in primary schools.
Moreover
, any new
language
is easy to learn at
young age so
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a young age, so
a young age so
it would be easily
adoptable
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adopted
and so anyone can get the command and grip over a foreign
language
easily. I agree for the compulsion on foreign
language
mainly for
two
reasons.
Firstly
, It provides
one
more skill to be added in
ones
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one's
persona and can be used at any stage of life to treat it as
advantage
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an advantage
.
For instance
, when a person applies for a job and there are many candidates applied for the same job, but when
employer
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an employer
the employer
want
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wants
a
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an
employee with skill of foreign
language
as now-a-days its very common to be asked for
knowledge
of
foreign
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foreign languages
a foreign language
language
. At
this
stage the very skill turns out to be very essential and important.
Seondly
, the
knowledge
of foreign
language
opens new opportunities in
business
as well.
For example
, to expand
business
not only within the
country but
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country, but
also
in other countries as well. The common
language
factor gives you
better understanding
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a better understanding
of other
market’s
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market
business
opportunities, it
also
provides you change to explain your idea and
business
into other market very well so it
can not
can not
cannot
be misunderstood and fail. These are
one
of the key advantages
achived
to gain with effort
achieved
when
one
have
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has
knowledge
of
foreign
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foreign languages
a foreign language
language
, which should be
learn
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learned
as early as possible in
individul’s
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individual’s
individual
life so as suggested it should be added as
compulsory subject
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a compulsory subject
in primary schools.
On the
contrary there
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contrary, there
are few aspects which leads in a disagreement to imply forcefully any
language
or subject in schools like, it makes very difficult for pupils to learn
two
language
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languages
at same
time
and slow down the
time
of developing command over
one
language
specially the
language
which is not used natively and in family surroundings. There are few
surverys
consider in a comprehensive way
surveys
servers
surfers
are done to show the result when a student learn
native
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a native language
language
only and when a student learn
two
language
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languages
at
same
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the same time
time
in which
one
is native and
one
is foreign. These
surveys
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survey
survey's
results
shows
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show
that student
learn
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learns
one
language
more
quicky
with rapid movements
quickly
in
compare
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comparing
to when learns
two
language
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languages
at a
time
, so it concluded as
disadvantage
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a disadvantage
disadvantages
. In conclusion, I would say that in
compare
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comparing
to disadvantages of learning new
language
at school there are more advantages and benefits when an individual is having strength of more
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
one
language
,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
a foreign
language
.
Language
gives
vast scope
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the vast scope
of reachability to peoples and their cultures and societies to be
learn
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learned
learnt
and acknowledgement
world
about it. Only
language
has
power
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the power
to
though which
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though, which
knowledge
sharing is possible. So
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
learn
leading
foreign
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a foreign language
language
should be made compulsory in schools to get its benefits from the early stage of life.

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