Individual can do nothing to improve the environment. Only government and large companies make a difference. To what extent do you agree and disagree.

It is irrefutable that protecting
environment
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the environment
is very important for our survival. Some people argue that individual cannot contribute to it and it is the responsibility of government and big companies. I completely disagree with
this
view. Every person can make a difference and every step count. In
this
essay I shall put forth my arguments to support my views.
To begin
with, nowadays major threat to nature is plastic. Each and every
items
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item
we use day today contains plastic, which stays forever in
land scape
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the landscape
landscape
. Even though many countries has banned the use of
this
,
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,
still it is not 100% successful until people stop using it. What if an individual
take
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takes
an oath to carry their own cloth bag to buy groceries
?
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?
This
is more effective than some other
body forcing
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body, forcing
not to do so.
In other words
, when people realize the importance of protecting mother earth, that it will make a massive difference.
Secondly
,
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,
another major problem currently we are encountering is
air
pollution and poor quality of
air
to breath. Major contributor to
this
issue is, big industries and
increase
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an increase
in the number of vehicles on the road.
Last
month Delhi, capital city of India altered with very poor quality of
air
. So how can we mitigate
this
problem
?
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?
when
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When
people start using a public transport to commute to office or any other place
,
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,
there will be a drastic drop in the vehicle on
road
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the road
a road
roads
and which will automatically improve the
air
quality.
In addition
to it, nowadays most of the people volunteering themselves to clean the beaches and lakes which is a good
movement
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move
. To conclude, it is merely very difficult for the state bodies and other organization
to take
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take
care of the environment completely. It is
equal responsibility
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the equal responsibility
of an individual to join
hand
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hands
with the government for the improvement of
environment
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the environment
.
This
can make a colossal difference to make an earth to
better place
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a better place
to live.

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