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Millons of people every year move to English speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reason for your answer.

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Introduction
Now -a-days most of the competitive exams are in
English
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language
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this
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 increased the importance and necessity of the
language
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English
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 has become an international acceptable
language
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 and
this
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 made the students at worldwide to learn
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
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one
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 of the priority
language
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Most of the
multi national
involving or operating in several nations or nationalities
multinational
 companies
also
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 recruiting the
peolple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
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,
who know's the
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 by that they can serve the international clients in a better way.
Millons
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Millions
 of people every year move to
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 speaking countries
such
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 as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university to study at the best institute's and to get great jobs in
shorter period
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a shorter period
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By learning
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
one
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 can improve their
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 and settle in
career
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a career
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.
It helps to get
a
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an
 admission
in
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into
 schools
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colleges and at universities very easily
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Most of the countries in the world accept
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
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one
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 of their regional languages.
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 is
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 of the
reason
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reasons
 to seek
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 by the students and employees who want to migrate to foreign countries
.
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based
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Based
up on
in contact with, on top of
upon
 the fluency of the
language
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 speaking many companies are offering the jobs to the freshers without any experience.
Conclusion
Some countries are offering the Perminent Resident status to the foreigners based on the grade
recieved
conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
 on the
competative
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
 exams which purely based on knowledge of the
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
.

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