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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer andd include any relevant examples from your own kowledge or experience

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Dear Linda, I'
m
 writing to apologize and explain a few changes on our
vacacion
leisure time away from work devoted to rest or pleasure
vacation
 plans, as I must attend to a
last
 minute family ceremony
in
Suggestion
on
 the same days of my visit to your home country. My cousin Brianna has postponed her wedding in three weeks due to private financial matters, which makes the new date be at the end of May. As I'
m
 one of the bride's maids, I had to cancel my flight tickets to Vancouver for now. I'
m
 sorry for changing our plans without consulting you
first
, since I know that had already planned out trip in details to enjoy the Canadian spring the most. Despite the date change, I'
m
 still thinking about visiting you
this
 year. In
this
 way, I'd love to travel to the West Coast in July, when there will be a mild weather to swim in the blue lakes. I hope the new date doesn't ruin our plans.
Best
wishes, Cibele
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