Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer andd include any relevant examples from your own kowledge or experience

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Dear Linda, I'

writing to apologize and explain a few changes on our

vacacion

leisure time away from work devoted to rest or pleasure

vacation

plans, as I must attend to a

last

minute family ceremony

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the same days of my visit to your home country. My cousin Brianna has postponed her wedding in three weeks due to private financial matters, which makes the new date be at the end of May. As I'

one of the bride's maids, I had to cancel my flight tickets to Vancouver for now. I'

sorry for changing our plans without consulting you

first

, since I know that had already planned out trip in details to enjoy the Canadian spring the most. Despite the date change, I'

still thinking about visiting you

this

year. In

this

way, I'd love to travel to the West Coast in July, when there will be a mild weather to swim in the blue lakes. I hope the new date doesn't ruin our plans.

Best

wishes, Cibele

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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