Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Government

spending on roads is more important than the railways.

However both

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However, both

are most essential to be improved just for the better service for people.The

government

should spend

money

on which is more important and is causing

effect

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the effect

an effect

to daily life.

Firstly

,

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would disagree with the point that railways

has

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have

to be spent more

money

than that

of

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on

roads with both the needs for railways and roads. For the improvement of railways would be either the tracks or the availability of trains and

maximum

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maximizes

maximize

maximizing

maximized

the quality of food.They should estimate the number of people who are using

railways

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the railways

for means of transport according to which the

money

can be utilized.

For

example few

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example, few

cities in

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

most of the population

travel

on trains for work and it is always busy that in

mornings

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the mornings

so they came up plan with increasing the trains in

mornings

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the mornings

and gradually reducing when not in peak hours or if needed new tracks can be added but whereas cities in hilltops developing the railways by spending

lot

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lots

of

money

is no use.

Secondly

,

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,

the roads are

primary source

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the primary source

a primary source

of transport.Even to reach a station the main mode is

travel

on

road

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the road

to

travel

in

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on

the train.If the roads are not developed one major problem would be water clogging during rains and even

then

the

government

neglects the roads can form holes and even walking on

such

roads can be difficult.

However due

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However, due

to increase in population if everyone starts driving

cars

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cars, then

then

roads

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the roads

would be jammed and cause delays.The

government

can

additionally

widen the roads to make

travel

easier and

also

required precautions when floods occur.In

few europe countries people

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a few European countries, people

a few European countries people

few European countries people

few Europe countries people

usually don't prefer to

using

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use

railways so the

government

completely stopped working on

improvement

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the improvement

of it and focused more on roads. In the conclusion

,

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

would say that

government

of any state before spending

money

on either of the two it has to analyse which is more important and requires more attention need to be developed according to the number of people depending and which can be more benefited to people in their daily life and improvise it.