Some parents think children should have mobile phones, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is often argued by parents that their kids should have
mobile
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a mobile phone
phone
while some do not agree with this
view point
. In my opinion a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
this
device has became
any integral part of human life as it is the most efficient way of communication Suggestion
become
besides
children’s can use
it for studying if used only for right purpose
.
Nowadays, Many parents are purchasing the mobile device for their Suggestion
the right purpose
kids especially
for teenagers as they are travelling to schools which are far away from home or staying in hostel. Due to the Accept comma addition
kids, especially
phone
parents or children’s can easily communicate with each other on button click. Also
however
, due the modern technology mobile
phones can Accept comma addition
technology, mobile
also
them in studying. This
handset can perform all the activities of computer like, surfing the internet, watching educational videos, also
it is possible to create power point presentation through phones.
But teenagers do not use
the phones for studying instead
they use
it for playing games. The mobile phones are mostly
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are mostly used
mostly use
are mostly using
use
for running social media application like Facebook, Instagram. Even the 4 to 5 years old kids nowadays, want mobile phones. This
can be most harmful to them as continuous use
of phone
can damage the eyes or it can be use
to play violent and dangerous Suggestion
used
games
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games, for
for
example blue
whale, Accept comma addition
example, blue
this
game in 2014 motivated the teenagers to commit suicide as task
.
In conclusion, Suggestion
a task
Use
of the mobile phone
have
its own benefit as well as hazardous effect. As stated Suggestion
has
use
of this
device has more benefits like communication, but also
has many disadvantages. Parents should guide their youngster's to take the benefit of this
technology along with providing then
safety instructions.objective case of they
them
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