Some parents think children should have mobile phones, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is often argued by parents that their kids should have

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a mobile phone

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while some do not agree with

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view point

a mental position from which things are viewed

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. In my opinion

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device has

became

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become

any integral part of human life as it is the most efficient way of communication

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children’s can

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it for studying if used only for

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the right purpose

. Nowadays, Many parents are purchasing the mobile device for their

kids especially

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kids, especially

for teenagers as they are travelling to schools which are far away from home or staying in hostel. Due to the

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parents or children’s can easily communicate with each other on button click.

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, due the modern

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technology, mobile

phones can

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them in studying.

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handset can perform all the activities of computer like, surfing the internet, watching educational videos,

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it is possible to create power point presentation through phones. But teenagers do not

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the phones for studying

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they

use

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it for playing games. The mobile phones

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are mostly used

mostly use

are mostly using

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for running social media application like Facebook, Instagram. Even the 4 to 5 years old kids nowadays, want mobile phones.

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can be most harmful to them as continuous

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of

phone

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can damage the eyes or it can be

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used

to play violent and dangerous

games

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games, for

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example blue

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example, blue

whale,

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game in 2014 motivated the teenagers to commit suicide as

task

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a task

. In conclusion,

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of the mobile

phone

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have

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has

its own benefit as well as hazardous effect. As stated

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device has more benefits like communication, but

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has many disadvantages. Parents should guide their youngster's to take the benefit of

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technology along with providing

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then

objective case of they

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safety instructions.