Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is widely argued that government should impose a strict
law
to prevent
noise
pollution
becoming a means of disruption to other people.
This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having
strict
Suggestion
strict laws
a strict law
law
against
noise
pollution
. Having a firm
law
against the
noise
caused by the people will certainly benefit others. It will help in reducing
noise
pollution
as well as it will in reducing health effect like stress, hearing loss and communication problems. Imposing a rule to control
noise
will have a greater impact to reduce
noise
pollution
while if
noise
is reduced children, old people, and animals would suffer from hearing loss, stress and poor concentration.
For instance
, in INDIA during festival season
noise
pollution
increases by 40%
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
normal days.
This
leads to hearing loss in children’s and animal
also
effects
have an effect upon
affects
their health. But we cannot control certain
noise
like industrial, drilling, construction. For a every country developed or developing to industries and has to build new infrastructure in order to meet the requirements.
However if
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However, if
there is
law
Suggestion
a law
to stop
noise
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noise, then
then
there would be no development.
for
Suggestion
For
example, even for building a normal tar road there are various machinery's involved from drilling, rolling mill, tar laying truck. It is not possible to stop the
noise
which is made by
this
machine’s In conclusion,
their
in or at that place
there
should be certain restriction’s
law
on the
noise
caused by people as there are various health problem related to
it but
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it, but
it should
also
be considered that certain sounds cannot control.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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